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Position:Home>Poetry> Haiku poem on lost love.?Question:What do you think of my haiku? ;) any feedbacks will help. thanks. Tears burn down my face All I did is make you cry Now I’m here alone Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: What do you think of my haiku? ;) any feedbacks will help. thanks. Tears burn down my face All I did is make you cry Now I’m here alone funny you post this tonight. me and my bf of a year just broke up tonight, and it was my fault. now i feel your poem deeply. sounds great to me, keep it up ;) It is soooo sweet! I think you are a natural poetry writer. Keep it up! Simple and to the point. I like it. Great! Waaaayyy better than any haiku I could ever write |