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Question:What do you think of my haiku?
;) any feedbacks will help.
thanks.

Tears burn down my face
All I did is make you cry
Now I’m here alone


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: What do you think of my haiku?
;) any feedbacks will help.
thanks.

Tears burn down my face
All I did is make you cry
Now I’m here alone

funny you post this tonight. me and my bf of a year just broke up tonight, and it was my fault. now i feel your poem deeply.

sounds great to me, keep it up ;)

It is soooo sweet! I think you are a natural poetry writer. Keep it up!

Simple and to the point. I like it.

Great! Waaaayyy better than any haiku I could ever write