Do you like my clean poem?

Question:honey you look
so good
you walk so fine
when you smile at me
it just blows my mind

as i gazed into
your pale green eyes
through buds of may
under clear blue skies
you look so good
it blows my mind

honey i want you
it's quarter to two
it feels so good
when i'm with you
my soul flies free
when you satisfy me

...why no gas you ask? i had kraut dogs last night and a salad, believe me some where inside there's a gas poem waiting to explode. i got censored last night, and i'm through with this dump of a poetry forum. So it's a two part question, where can I write really sick poems for you all that you'll read and I won't get messed with by a mod. Thanks.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: honey you look
so good
you walk so fine
when you smile at me
it just blows my mind

as i gazed into
your pale green eyes
through buds of may
under clear blue skies
you look so good
it blows my mind

honey i want you
it's quarter to two
it feels so good
when i'm with you
my soul flies free
when you satisfy me

...why no gas you ask? i had kraut dogs last night and a salad, believe me some where inside there's a gas poem waiting to explode. i got censored last night, and i'm through with this dump of a poetry forum. So it's a two part question, where can I write really sick poems for you all that you'll read and I won't get messed with by a mod. Thanks.

You will deflate a lot of people that view this. They expect so much more gas. This is well done. I sense from your dissatisfaction that a new site will be launched or explelled or ejected, etc. soon solely for the gaseous study of gas.

MMH ITS OKAY!!!!!!!................................
keep trying .....& we expect more& more from uuuu
keep it up

ya.........it's gud but quiet lenghty.......

Time for some Bean-o!

I'm posting over at http://poemhunter.com/

Give that a try.