Rate my poems?

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I'm 13 and kinda started writing, looking for your opinions on em.

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I'm 13 and kinda started writing, looking for your opinions on em.

Your poems are pretty well written.
I would recommend that you start learning the ins and outs of poetry. I used to think I was a poetry master, but I realized I had a lot to learn. Read some of the poems by William Blake, which portray the duality of Innocence and Experience. If you learn meter (iambic pentameter...), read some more poetry, and continue writing:

You will understand the full extent of poetry and be able to express it fluently through writing. Keep it up.

Those poems are awesome!!
I encourage you to keep writing.
Better than mine and I'm only a year older than you. haha
Sad but true.

you will become a very good poet if u keep on writing!=)
plz read my newest poem..and tell me what u think =)
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