Do you think a father would like this Poem?

Question:my dad and i don't get to see each other much. I think he might enjoy a poem, anyone want to rate it, no, make sujestions on how to make it better? thanks!

Daddie's little girl
Yes, i'm a daddie's little girl
even though i am fourteen
in public i still don't mind to be seen
holding my dad's hand

I'll never be too old
and never to meture
for i can always be shure
that you will be there for me

I'm my daddie's little girl
and this will never change
though i may get older
I'm still your little girl!

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: my dad and i don't get to see each other much. I think he might enjoy a poem, anyone want to rate it, no, make sujestions on how to make it better? thanks!

Daddie's little girl
Yes, i'm a daddie's little girl
even though i am fourteen
in public i still don't mind to be seen
holding my dad's hand

I'll never be too old
and never to meture
for i can always be shure
that you will be there for me

I'm my daddie's little girl
and this will never change
though i may get older
I'm still your little girl!

it'll relief him. he'll no that u are growing up fast but a little girl is still living in your soul and no matter what that little girl can be unleashed and u can relive the life u once lived where everything was easy and when u got in trouble it never cam down on your shoulders

Yes that is really cool ... don't change a thing .... he will love it

yes, he'll tear up. please spell-check it first.

Well I see a couple minor spelling mistakes, but I would be quite proud to receive such a poem. A very good write.

Yes, i think he will love it! Good JOB!

Really good!!!

i htink it is very good and it will show him how much you care about him even if you don't see him much i mean my dad isn't a dad so i don't know very much but i think he will love it.

as long as it came from you. he will love it.