My poem the longest days. what do you think?

Question:Winter has come and gone so why am i all alone
Spring bring flowers but some days nothing even matters like long ago.

Where he went we did not see ' he just took off from mom and me .We can not see any more roads and we been frying up toads ' as were so dang hungry.

Back in 32 not to much jobs to do ' .Why Dad left We'll never know ' and why we were so hungry ' and me and mama had to sew all the foreman's clothes of the men panning for Gold.

Yes that was the year when the locusts brought fear and many lost their crops and even their lives.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Winter has come and gone so why am i all alone
Spring bring flowers but some days nothing even matters like long ago.

Where he went we did not see ' he just took off from mom and me .We can not see any more roads and we been frying up toads ' as were so dang hungry.

Back in 32 not to much jobs to do ' .Why Dad left We'll never know ' and why we were so hungry ' and me and mama had to sew all the foreman's clothes of the men panning for Gold.

Yes that was the year when the locusts brought fear and many lost their crops and even their lives.

I think it is a lovely poem about some very unlovely times. Good job.

Pretty good 7 out of 10

1832? panning for gold, or 1932?
Either way, I liked it.

Picturesque! Lovely! Touching!

good poetry my friend

Interesting.

Its so nice,full of emotions and fact of life,keep it up,and best of luck.