Critique please..?

Question:Vomit for Validation

I feel my thoughts becoming actions;
each second that passes
makes me want to commit this
secret act I hold so dear.

I cease to think about anything else,
hurriedly I walk to the bathroom
impatient for what is to come.
I stand before the toilet,
fingers down my throat.

My worries and emotions take the form of
peanut butter and cookies,
chips and crackers,
cupcakes and brownies.

Now they are a brown, fluid mess
collected in the perfectly white toilet bowl,
soon to be guiltlessly flushed away,
never to be seen again.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Vomit for Validation

I feel my thoughts becoming actions;
each second that passes
makes me want to commit this
secret act I hold so dear.

I cease to think about anything else,
hurriedly I walk to the bathroom
impatient for what is to come.
I stand before the toilet,
fingers down my throat.

My worries and emotions take the form of
peanut butter and cookies,
chips and crackers,
cupcakes and brownies.

Now they are a brown, fluid mess
collected in the perfectly white toilet bowl,
soon to be guiltlessly flushed away,
never to be seen again.

Thats really good. Maybe you could put a little more emotion into it?
Othwise, good. =]
i hope you get better dear =(

ahhh the poetry it burns!

this poem makes me want to vomit...

Wow thats good...very good imagery....although it may be a bit too good use of imagery....