Just a silly poem.. =]?

Question:I'm walking down
this lonely street
I see no one with me
I'm walking to my own beat

Sometimes I see someone
in the distant haze
I run towards it
but it never pays

I find I never
learn the facts
that everyone else
travels in packs.

But I'm destined to be alone
for how hard I tried
no one will ever know
how many times I've lied

I say I'm okay
plaster a fake smile upon my face
why is it I always feel
I'm losing this damned race

I see someone again
a far way up the street
I see if I can catch them
yet all I find, is my own beat.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I'm walking down
this lonely street
I see no one with me
I'm walking to my own beat

Sometimes I see someone
in the distant haze
I run towards it
but it never pays

I find I never
learn the facts
that everyone else
travels in packs.

But I'm destined to be alone
for how hard I tried
no one will ever know
how many times I've lied

I say I'm okay
plaster a fake smile upon my face
why is it I always feel
I'm losing this damned race

I see someone again
a far way up the street
I see if I can catch them
yet all I find, is my own beat.

WoW! I loved it! Really, it's amazing. You made on grammer mistake, but I won't point it out. Part of being a poet is realizing your own mistakes.

its pretty good

Very good indeed. I would like it better if every line has the same no. of syllables. Sometimes you 'see' poetry rather than read aloud.

And have you tried too hard to get the rhyme? In school I used to write the rhyming words first and then think of the poem!

haha!
i loved it!
~~judosoccermylife

It's pretty good.
I like it.
Nice work:)

i like it