How is my poem???

Question:im just talking about a place where i go when i listen to the magical place of josh groban...and when i think about other things

halfway between ethereality and secrets
whispered through cupped hands
carried by the wind
across the land

ever so dear
calling my name
silence is the song
ever since i came

with my eyes closed
i see the silhouette
of divinity and beauty
i have never met

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: im just talking about a place where i go when i listen to the magical place of josh groban...and when i think about other things

halfway between ethereality and secrets
whispered through cupped hands
carried by the wind
across the land

ever so dear
calling my name
silence is the song
ever since i came

with my eyes closed
i see the silhouette
of divinity and beauty
i have never met

It's a very creative poem and has good rhythm. I like the "whispered through cupped hands" part...very nice job. keep writing poems!

I love it.

I think its interesting. Its short, simple, and to the point. I like the use of the words...its creative.

uniquely creative

I didn't like it, sorry

I really like it, it has nice rythm.