Poem please rate?

Question:I couldn't belive, what i've just seen
Her eyes hazel green
as noble as i can be
I would cross the 7 seas
To kiss your face Constantine

NO,NO,NO it can not be
I must be imagineing things
There's no such thing as Constantine
as I toss and turn in my dream
screaming CONSTANTINE

im 11 is this a good start

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I couldn't belive, what i've just seen
Her eyes hazel green
as noble as i can be
I would cross the 7 seas
To kiss your face Constantine

NO,NO,NO it can not be
I must be imagineing things
There's no such thing as Constantine
as I toss and turn in my dream
screaming CONSTANTINE

im 11 is this a good start

Considering you're eleven yes, this is a great start (and by that I mean it's a good poem. hehe). Keep writing...you'll get the rhythm down in time and your poems will keep improving! Great job.

You're 11? Yes, it's good start then. I think you could have potential! I would suggest that you first correct the minor spelling typos, and visit www.poetsconnect.com. That should give you some inspiration. But yes, it's a very good start young lad! :D

Yeah very nice start at 11 mix of dreams and reality, I like it