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Position:Home>Poetry> Please read my poem. tell me what you think?Question:any words i could modify..also if you want..analyze me as an individual from this poem Dear Flower Dear flower how do you grow Does your delicate sprout peak out of the seed Or venture out, searching for a nee Do your roots dig deep within the soil Or puzzle up into a knotted coil Do your leaves gently unwind Or quickly show for us to find Do you reach high in the sky, for all to see Or innocently hide beneath a tree Do you petals sway in the warm summer breeze Or stand proud, like beautifully untouched leaves Dear flower how do you die Do you topple down, withering away Or gleam with us for another perfect day. Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: any words i could modify..also if you want..analyze me as an individual from this poem Dear Flower Dear flower how do you grow Does your delicate sprout peak out of the seed Or venture out, searching for a nee Do your roots dig deep within the soil Or puzzle up into a knotted coil Do your leaves gently unwind Or quickly show for us to find Do you reach high in the sky, for all to see Or innocently hide beneath a tree Do you petals sway in the warm summer breeze Or stand proud, like beautifully untouched leaves Dear flower how do you die Do you topple down, withering away Or gleam with us for another perfect day. I think you wrote a nice poem. Considering analyzing you as person that is difficult so don't be offend it if I did it wrong. I would say that you are as confused as I am not knowing what to do, is it a right decision or not. How will it affect you, but those are the questions we will ask ourselves till the day we die. thats awsome ^_^ *thumbs up* most of it doesn't make sense & to tell you the truth..........I hated it & I think it sucks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... Well, I guess it's OK. But maybe if it was simpler it would be better. I am a very practical person and not one who wonders about why a flower does what it does, so your poem doesn't appeal to me much, I'm afraid. What is a 'searching for a nee'?. I'm not being funny, the only nee I know is the one spelled knee - but that doesn't make sense. I have no idea what the poem says about you, except perhaps that you have your head in the clouds and you are a bit of dreamer. forget that dude said that he hate it, that was a nice poem UGH! I loathe stuff about flowers and nature and those stupid happy-feel-good poems!!!! Where is the emotion?! |