I am ready to be torn apart by you all reading this?

Question:Open her eyes, she will never do.
She will stay with him no matter how blue.
He leaves her alone night after night
For he thinks she will never take flight.
In the night she cries herself to sleep
Knowing she is in far too deep.
Will it ever change or will it stay this way?
Will he realize that in the end she will stray?
She will walk away when enough is enough
Because she has realized she just isn’t that tough.
Tears are streaming down her face knowing that
It’s now close to the end of the race.
She’s almost ready to take flight
And finally give into the fight
That has battling in her heart
Knowing that he was probably never
Her's right from the start.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Open her eyes, she will never do.
She will stay with him no matter how blue.
He leaves her alone night after night
For he thinks she will never take flight.
In the night she cries herself to sleep
Knowing she is in far too deep.
Will it ever change or will it stay this way?
Will he realize that in the end she will stray?
She will walk away when enough is enough
Because she has realized she just isn’t that tough.
Tears are streaming down her face knowing that
It’s now close to the end of the race.
She’s almost ready to take flight
And finally give into the fight
That has battling in her heart
Knowing that he was probably never
Her's right from the start.

I love this poem very much. It show the feelings of every woman's facing every day in this part of the world. Keep it up, my dear friend!

Pretty good..
i don't like how you rythmed at the begining and then stopped though. Good Job though!

Touching. Some of the wording could be re-arranged but it is good.

very good I like it a lot!

Look, I don't like how people say that they don't like this or that..
I've seen poems on here that are more amazing than the ones that are published!

Really good, follow your dreams=]!

Your poem is amazing! Keep doing what you do=)

after heart. why not put, " Now she knows he's not Mr. Right" but i like it. sounds like a relationship i was in , had the same ending.