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Question:I am still not finished, but these lines are what I have so far:

They say it's easier to forgive than forget,
But I'm not sure I've done either yet.
I may not have any bruises or scars to show,
But you words hurt worse than you'll ever know.
It's been years, but your voice still haunts me,
And allowing myself to trust again hasn't been easy.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I am still not finished, but these lines are what I have so far:

They say it's easier to forgive than forget,
But I'm not sure I've done either yet.
I may not have any bruises or scars to show,
But you words hurt worse than you'll ever know.
It's been years, but your voice still haunts me,
And allowing myself to trust again hasn't been easy.

I think that whoever your writing about really hurt you and you should try to incorporate a little more anger into it or maybe sadness. Otherwise nice job.

It's great, keep up the good work.

I think your forcing the ryhming type of thing, but it still comes together nicely. Its a good start for a poem, im sure the rest of it will turn out lovely.

I Like what is written so far, I would be most interested in reading the finished piece.