What do you think of these poems written by a 7th grader?

Question:What is life?
When happiness is gone
when your world turns grey
and you just frown

You smile, but its fake
No one sees you
just right through you
Your sould is like a dark place
They cant see what you feel inside
Darkness, that i can't leave behind

Here's the second one:

No one notices
how badly she hurts
There's a smile on her face
but a frown in her heart
No one notices
her sadness as she walks by
No one notices
the tears that slide down her face
No one notices.

Here's another one:

Her days are filled with sorrow
Only a smile or two
Wondering who's gonna save her
If that's even true

Suffering from a broken heart
she's been brought down so many times
Not any hope left
Feels like happiness is a crime

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: What is life?
When happiness is gone
when your world turns grey
and you just frown

You smile, but its fake
No one sees you
just right through you
Your sould is like a dark place
They cant see what you feel inside
Darkness, that i can't leave behind

Here's the second one:

No one notices
how badly she hurts
There's a smile on her face
but a frown in her heart
No one notices
her sadness as she walks by
No one notices
the tears that slide down her face
No one notices.

Here's another one:

Her days are filled with sorrow
Only a smile or two
Wondering who's gonna save her
If that's even true

Suffering from a broken heart
she's been brought down so many times
Not any hope left
Feels like happiness is a crime

so much emotion has been transmitted by the author to the reader with these poems it just makes you feel what they were feeling at the time. these are just utterly beautiful in my opinion!:)

=| Emo? Lol, No he or she o probably just feeling down, kinda odd though, councilling maybe?

I feel that they were written by a very down and inwardly hurt individual. They are pretty deep poems, but I think they are pretty good!

They are very good, but very mature for a seventh grader! She seems very unhappy

They're okay...for a 7th grader.
Sounds like normal teen angst.

it is amazing how people have that much feeling t

There good.. And not just for a 7th grader.. And it's not a big deal.. Everyone has feelings and peoplof all ages express it in different ways.. Some better than others.
I'm in 8th grade and i did and do the same...
Tell her to keep writing cuz it's good

Your sould is in a dark place? What's that? They're pretty good for a 7th grader. I guess that is soul?