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Position:Home>Poetry> This poem rhymes I think what do you think?Question:When I was a boy I walked my woodland with joy and a little sadness It was my solace It was my place Each tree I knew and its face I climbed my pine So tall and straight And perched, eagle like, to watch and wait To see the lovers come and go To see the fox that I had come to know The mists of dawn the sun peeping through The call of a dove and the morning dew And all the while I’d watch and wait Atop my pine so tall and straight. Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: When I was a boy I walked my woodland with joy and a little sadness It was my solace It was my place Each tree I knew and its face I climbed my pine So tall and straight And perched, eagle like, to watch and wait To see the lovers come and go To see the fox that I had come to know The mists of dawn the sun peeping through The call of a dove and the morning dew And all the while I’d watch and wait Atop my pine so tall and straight. Nice! I enjoyed this poem very much. I just finished reading an autobiography by the late Katherine Hepburn called "Me" and I was surprised that she loved climbing trees when she was young. Trees are truly magical things. I used to love climbing a weeping willow. It was huge and beautiful. For a grumpy old man that was good That sounds amazing! It really shows how solitude can lead to someone loving nature. Sure, it rhymes. Nice work too. ye its amazing did you write it ? it rymes perfectly! VERY NICE! Some parts yes Grumpy old man. Now that's what I call precedence. Great work Best wishes, Peter Yes, it does. I like it a lot. Very good. |