Friday and it still is a depressing week. how is this one.?

Question:"rain of tears"

I fall to the ground, like autumns withered leaves,
my life colored now with the ecstacy of pain.
Far from all the bliss of a brand new sunrise,
but now fast approaching, sunsets rain of tears.

The tears that fall from the sky help to feed my sorrow,
lost inside the clouds with no memories to claim.
I live in different times and deal in different ways,
I feel so much slower now yet I'm not quite dead.

What do I have left deep inside my past,
maybe it is alchemy making gold from lead.
I've now come and gone, I've arrived and I have left,
and not one single word was ever said again.

The wicked hands of time, move but never rest,
time has come, all is due, I must pay for all my sins.
Please don't fear the fire, it will burn and it will cleanse,
Take my hand and join me now in eternal sleep

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "rain of tears"

I fall to the ground, like autumns withered leaves,
my life colored now with the ecstacy of pain.
Far from all the bliss of a brand new sunrise,
but now fast approaching, sunsets rain of tears.

The tears that fall from the sky help to feed my sorrow,
lost inside the clouds with no memories to claim.
I live in different times and deal in different ways,
I feel so much slower now yet I'm not quite dead.

What do I have left deep inside my past,
maybe it is alchemy making gold from lead.
I've now come and gone, I've arrived and I have left,
and not one single word was ever said again.

The wicked hands of time, move but never rest,
time has come, all is due, I must pay for all my sins.
Please don't fear the fire, it will burn and it will cleanse,
Take my hand and join me now in eternal sleep

sad... i think that has been the best one i've read all week from u. i think there was another but i forget if it was this week or last. really really deep. like ocean deep. it says soooo much about life.

to the guy that thinks this is emo it's not. u really don't have a clue.

and to the answer above mine with the poem: i really like your poem too. i haven't read many of your poems but i really enjoyed that one.

I cried.

really depressive.....

Wow, that's deep.

bravo bravo your inner part is more smart than you think but you are telling the true of the life I but you dont have to pay for something that you can remove and i think you know what i am saing well congratulations

I liked it

This is really deep. i'm guessing it based of your life since the comment you left me.
this is very sad and exspressive.
i hope things get alot better for you.
i know you don't know me but if you ever need anyone to talk to i'm here:)
I doo know abit of where your at, like pain i mean. My bf does ecstacy.
and my mums always trying to kill her self.
both have help, neither want it.
neither did my best friend. and thats why shes missed.

could we get any more emo

I am sorry to hear that you have had a bad week. Remember that we are all here for you whether it's to read your poetry or just to chat and say hi.

Keep up the good writing. I for one enjoy it.

well if Friday is as bleak for you as it is for me then there isn't much point in fighting it. let's just write stuff like this:

FUTILITY

Once the horse has gone lame
He's out of the game;
Gelded and put out to pasture,
At least he doesn't have the brains to miss
The days when he was stronger and faster
Ignorance really is bliss...
Every dog has his bite
That's all right
He'll never quit chasing the cat,
At least he can always dig up a bone
I'm watched over like a lab rat
I guess it beats being alone
I detest this
feeling so pent up and restless
I don't really know what I need
But I fight the urge to become obsessed
With how many drops I can bleed
While they say I should be feeling blessed

That was good, and now that today is the official first day of spring, write one about beginning anew, growing and flourishing, blooming into something beautiful.