Another piece of pain I have released. Do u like it.?

Question:"released"

Somewhere almost meant to be,
where I hear not a single word.
I keep my flame of red hot hate,
Keep me warm til my dying day.

Seated on the edge of what is left,
I'm an empty shell, overflowing with regret.
I stand and watch as my simple soul,
mixed with anger, creates a crimson flow.

I know I've wasted my whole life,
Please this once, just face the facts.
I'll take it back, the wastes that's mine,
but do what's right and claim what's yours.

I'll hang on to all this pain,
become the sin of suicide.
Free from all that pulls us down,
drenched in blood, what becomes us now.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "released"

Somewhere almost meant to be,
where I hear not a single word.
I keep my flame of red hot hate,
Keep me warm til my dying day.

Seated on the edge of what is left,
I'm an empty shell, overflowing with regret.
I stand and watch as my simple soul,
mixed with anger, creates a crimson flow.

I know I've wasted my whole life,
Please this once, just face the facts.
I'll take it back, the wastes that's mine,
but do what's right and claim what's yours.

I'll hang on to all this pain,
become the sin of suicide.
Free from all that pulls us down,
drenched in blood, what becomes us now.

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now........... Ok, now either me or the purple whatever is totally off our rocker. I see no rhyme here, much less too rhymie rhyme.
Good job nonetheless. I think I will go and get a book of rhyming words and make sure I know what a rhyme is.
Write on.

uhh me like!!!
although it was a bit toooo rhymie rhyme for me

YES!!!!!!!! YESYESYES!!! I LUV IT!! please write more!

I'm sorry Steve.. I am such an idiot to take things out on you. I would never blame you if you never forgave me. I was such a ***** to say what I said. In the long run, it only makes you the better person, you didnt even attack back. I am ashamed of myself, and I will never forgive myself. I am sooo sorry

I feel your pain in this one. I especially like when you say, "I'll take it back, the wastes that's mine, but do what's right and claim what's yours." Not everyone will admit what wrongs they have done so admitting what you have is great.

ah...so master has done it yet again....i havent written much....i supposed i have no insipration...i have tried what you told me to do but i always end up not finishing the poem....i will keep trying though....
~Grasshopper

Yep, when you get done with that book Dondi, let me borrow it would you? Darn, and purple is my favorite color.... Oh well, really emo poem Steve.....I love it...amazing....oh, yes....wow....will you marry me...Oops, got carried away, hadn't seen any of those in a while, so thought I would remind you. Nope, not making fun of anyone, just bored out of my mind, and it is a getting back to your "roots" poem! Well done. Thanks.