Wht do you think??

Question:Fame is Lame.

Fame is lame
It just a game
A contest for the popular

So everybody knows your name
Who cares, that’s nothing
Compared to what we got
Which really isn’t a lot?

You spend all your time
All in the limelight
You don’t even consider
Us or our needs

You can’t put aside
All your limo rides
Our love is just one big act
It’s one big film scene

The parties are a must
You go, while leaving me here
Just wondering where we went wrong
I am wondering if maybe
I should just get gone

Your big time friends
Is where it all begins
They carry you to a place
Where you know no name or face
But your own

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Fame is Lame.

Fame is lame
It just a game
A contest for the popular

So everybody knows your name
Who cares, that’s nothing
Compared to what we got
Which really isn’t a lot?

You spend all your time
All in the limelight
You don’t even consider
Us or our needs

You can’t put aside
All your limo rides
Our love is just one big act
It’s one big film scene

The parties are a must
You go, while leaving me here
Just wondering where we went wrong
I am wondering if maybe
I should just get gone

Your big time friends
Is where it all begins
They carry you to a place
Where you know no name or face
But your own

Wow! This is soooo very true my friend (could use a tiny edit though) but, the message is so vivid and clear, precise and true none the less

Anyone can act, sign, dance, it's a totally new world and that's why I made a forum for poets to write anyway, anyhow and I will be putting out a book written my way, a new way of "Symbolic Poetry" with no holds bared (spelling?) LOL

what?

I really like it! It has a great message, and I like the structure. Great job!

I read the poem and I think it's really good.

nice poem man! that relates to mostly to lame n frame!
did u make this poem if ya did, AWSOME JOB!!!!!! :D it tells u a message n a lesson about life! Great!

well.... i mean its good, but usually when i write poetry i try to make it smooth and peaceful and imaginative and metaphoric, stuff like that. Not really just rhyming about any old thing. sorry but it sounds kind of like a Rap.

Thats really deep. It shows that fame is not what it seems. Don't think fame is great.
THAT IS AN AWESOME POEM!
Great job! And... I do think fame is lame !! Now that you've told me that!

I feel that you are more concentrated on your anger or you objection to fame, than actually composing it into the poetry. You should try to induct more "feeling" into your words. It is Kudos worthy though! (good job)
~*WinglessAngel*~

HOLY SHIIIIIII! you should get that published or something. i would totally show everyone this but i would be like plagurizing or whatever.

I think you meant it's just a game not it just a game. You need some punctuation other then that it's a nice poem.

its good