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Question:half-vast conspiracy; paranoid Narcissus


Only half as vast as the Kennedy conspiracy
no Bilderbergers or Masons, just me
conspiring to send me down the hole
with me and me and me and
whoever wants
to go for a ride
tight spiral spin into the me of me
where You reside, where I hide from me
and me and me.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: half-vast conspiracy; paranoid Narcissus


Only half as vast as the Kennedy conspiracy
no Bilderbergers or Masons, just me
conspiring to send me down the hole
with me and me and me and
whoever wants
to go for a ride
tight spiral spin into the me of me
where You reside, where I hide from me
and me and me.

Being only half understood (by me) doesn't stand in the way of enjoying the humor of the poem, and the playful use of language. I don't know what Bilderbergers or Masons are, but this poem is certainly not half vast, whichever way you spell that. I like the irony of the narcissist disparaging his self-importance.

Strangely compelling poem, but it not a ride I would like to take with you. Goodness what we both might find.

It's interesting.