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Question:Your kindness and your humor have captivated me!
I've come to love your soft eyes and strong hands unwillingly
You do not notice what you do to my heart,
I don't know where these feelings came from...
Or how they got their start.
I think about you way more than I should,
Feelings like this could be easily misunderstood.
But I've thought long and hard, thought these feelings through
And, I must admit...I think I'm falling in love with you.


I wrote this poem for the guy I love...


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Your kindness and your humor have captivated me!
I've come to love your soft eyes and strong hands unwillingly
You do not notice what you do to my heart,
I don't know where these feelings came from...
Or how they got their start.
I think about you way more than I should,
Feelings like this could be easily misunderstood.
But I've thought long and hard, thought these feelings through
And, I must admit...I think I'm falling in love with you.


I wrote this poem for the guy I love...

it's nice, he'll love it after reading this line:
I think about you way more than I should