Age & Depression inspired: Care to comment?

Question:Let's go, one last run
I know you have it in you
The final highlight

Go out in a blaze
And also passing the torch
Place your trust in me

Let the youth step in
Carrying your legacy
Forgetting you not

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Let's go, one last run
I know you have it in you
The final highlight

Go out in a blaze
And also passing the torch
Place your trust in me

Let the youth step in
Carrying your legacy
Forgetting you not

Very touching. Well done.

Very good

gud one...
but somewhere i being a poet myself, don't get the feel that it flows spontaneously...

still then, gud piece

I extend the following to Neonman and Mr. Biscuits:

Age and depression
They almost go hand in hand
Heal as time passes

Found friendships we cherish
As we go along life's way
Celebrate today

Temari

Time and sadness come
Is healing in the life plan?
You got to know it!

Years can condemn them
Age can weary them bent low
But we must not forget

Old and weary
With eyes runny and bleary,
He sees nothing but death
As he breathes his last breath
That takes him to Heaven,
Will he be forgiven
For all of his sins
`Fore the everlasting life begins?