A violation poem, you think?

Question:Good bye community
I am tired of y/a rules
busted for a violation
unknown why,
Better sites await
perhaps poetsofmars.com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Good bye community
I am tired of y/a rules
busted for a violation
unknown why,
Better sites await
perhaps poetsofmars.com

You can't leave - you've just become my contact!

Yawn.

What kind of poem is this? What is it suppposed to be about?

sorry don't really understand this poem

Violated by a violation
Such is the way of the YA nation
Sad but true, we will miss
If you've been given the big kiss
OFF.

Too literal. Try some kind of metaphor for being violated, or some word-play.

I think it's cute. I hope you don't really go away.

hey, you don't want to run away 'coz of this!! you won't solve problem by taking flight but by facing directly.
be consoled,some of us have been paralyzed and demobilized by violations, but endured. that's the Y/A nation as someone observed above. just develop a thick skin that bounces distractions off.

nice short poem.

what?

You ain't gonna get no violation for this poem, and you know it!
Just angry and frustrated right now....know how many deleted questions I've gotten? And took Y/A to task BIGTIME!
I will not fool around with judges who do NOT have the same # of university hours in English that I do!
Not bragging...that's a provable fact!

lol good job! express urself!

As cool as it is, poetsofmars.com doesn't have a forum-like discussion. But trust me, i know how it feels when my poems get deleted here.

a very nice poem. I actually understand violation poems, especially those from Mars. :)