This is from several months ago. I was a different person. How is this.?

Question:"forsaken"

I am you
stillborn.
Into this state
of being numb.
I am the temple
and the sacrifice.
The shrine
entombed.
Within lie all I am
and you.
The womb
from whence I came.
I am you
and if I am you
no love will prosper.
In this world.
If I am you
I am the faith.
If I am you
you shall not live
to save yourselves.
I bing no God.
No afterworld.
I am,
no more than a lie.
I live your life,
not for you.
I am a throne,
made from dust.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "forsaken"

I am you
stillborn.
Into this state
of being numb.
I am the temple
and the sacrifice.
The shrine
entombed.
Within lie all I am
and you.
The womb
from whence I came.
I am you
and if I am you
no love will prosper.
In this world.
If I am you
I am the faith.
If I am you
you shall not live
to save yourselves.
I bing no God.
No afterworld.
I am,
no more than a lie.
I live your life,
not for you.
I am a throne,
made from dust.

I feel like your tying our parrell lives into this. I'm sure you ment it for something else though.but it kinds sounds like we can't live our lives knowing the other ones in pain. So your trying to take the pain away. Xoxo its great no matter what!!

that nice. i like it so much. even tho im not too good with poetry and understandin that was still beautiful! ^^

How are you a different person? It's all life's great mystery.

Your poem is beautiful.

your poem is so beautiful i lov3 it and i dont say lov3 because its a strong word

I think you have grown in your writing, this is good, but I think you have added more depth and heart.

Did you mean I bring no God instead I bing no God? Other then that I like it. Very good.