Poem friend wrote?

Question:my friend is a VERY talented poet please comment on one of her new poems

i hide in the bright white spotlight
i hold myself together with the mask
i always hold up; life's just one great masquerade
you don't see me, but we dance.
i am an actress, but am i real?
i won't allow how i really feel.
i am the character, you can't bother me
i'm blind to all offstage.
romeo, you can call me juliet.
your love has left me broken
and with this dagger i declare
the words i've left unspoken
i'll take my life here on the stage
so i won't want to tonight.
smile for the camera
say everything's alright

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: my friend is a VERY talented poet please comment on one of her new poems

i hide in the bright white spotlight
i hold myself together with the mask
i always hold up; life's just one great masquerade
you don't see me, but we dance.
i am an actress, but am i real?
i won't allow how i really feel.
i am the character, you can't bother me
i'm blind to all offstage.
romeo, you can call me juliet.
your love has left me broken
and with this dagger i declare
the words i've left unspoken
i'll take my life here on the stage
so i won't want to tonight.
smile for the camera
say everything's alright

Gorgeous... i am in awe. I like how she says she "holds herself together with the mask" and how "life is just one big masquerade". She made that fit together perfectly. She is indeed very talented.
~*WinglessAngel*~

Nice, I like it.

its really good but it would be better if it rhymed..thts just my opinion

i like the first half and the way it starts out. i guess the romeo/juliet isnt my thing, i never read it. but i like it overall. keep writing! share more!

awww..............that is such a sweet poem!

o my goodness. That is REALLY good!! its so deep and has this sort of meaning that u have to try to figure out! i love it! <33