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Position:Home>Poetry> My poem 'call of the wild'. Your opinions!?Question:Grows there a wild flower, awaiting so long Among the cascade of buds so long, un-plucked Atop a valley, along the river, just a way off —Awaiting the touch of an aesthetic hand! Where green blades, in abundance, throughout the year, grow And mysterious ponds, silent and greatly still Leaps where a waterfall, down the hill Atop a valley, along the river, just a way off The deep water no one, so far, tasted Stands where a solitary maple tree Under it, till date, no one stretched or rested Or heard the hum of a hovering bee At a place, where there is no altitude Or false privileges, at all none Common or noble can seek alike Free muse and ready inspiration Emran Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Grows there a wild flower, awaiting so long Among the cascade of buds so long, un-plucked Atop a valley, along the river, just a way off —Awaiting the touch of an aesthetic hand! Where green blades, in abundance, throughout the year, grow And mysterious ponds, silent and greatly still Leaps where a waterfall, down the hill Atop a valley, along the river, just a way off The deep water no one, so far, tasted Stands where a solitary maple tree Under it, till date, no one stretched or rested Or heard the hum of a hovering bee At a place, where there is no altitude Or false privileges, at all none Common or noble can seek alike Free muse and ready inspiration Emran I really like it! and I wish I was there. I know it is amazing if it causes me to want to dive right in to this magical tapestry that you have painted in my head. Excuse me Robin, the comment was directed to Kate Alex Bahleef. My apologies to you for the mistake. Report It * You must be logged into Answers to add comments. Sign in or Register. Other Answers (7) |