I have a new poem. (yesterday) PLEASE READ. and tell me what u think?

Question:“Yesterday”
Brittany

When I hear that song it brings me back to the time you were here.
With him by her side, she would always be strong, living without fear.
As I wipe the tears from my eyes, I know he’s watching over me.
Wishing he were still here, I know that he would disagree.

He still loves her and always will, with everything he had.
In the land of ever after, no one will ever be sad.
Just like the one I lost, I have to keep faith.
God will always be right behind you, giving you strength.

In heaven I have heard it is nothing that you can think of.
Endless angles taking care of you, no anger, full of love
With God in your soul, things can happen like never before.
It will leave you to come back for more, like the ocean shore.

So for now grandpa, you will be in heart, but I know you are gone.
All I ask of you is to pray for me, that things will go well from now on.
When I am pointed in the wrong direction, just show me the way.
If there were only a time when I could go back to yesterday.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: “Yesterday”
Brittany

When I hear that song it brings me back to the time you were here.
With him by her side, she would always be strong, living without fear.
As I wipe the tears from my eyes, I know he’s watching over me.
Wishing he were still here, I know that he would disagree.

He still loves her and always will, with everything he had.
In the land of ever after, no one will ever be sad.
Just like the one I lost, I have to keep faith.
God will always be right behind you, giving you strength.

In heaven I have heard it is nothing that you can think of.
Endless angles taking care of you, no anger, full of love
With God in your soul, things can happen like never before.
It will leave you to come back for more, like the ocean shore.

So for now grandpa, you will be in heart, but I know you are gone.
All I ask of you is to pray for me, that things will go well from now on.
When I am pointed in the wrong direction, just show me the way.
If there were only a time when I could go back to yesterday.

Wow! I am blown away... It is really good. I wish I had your skills. The poem is beautiful! I love it.

This is a lovely poem and i loved the meanings in it and think you did a great job as it's it's really nice.....

It's so good, it's almost like a song. If you sing, maybe you should get some music to go with it and record it. It would sound really good.
Keep up the good work : )