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Let me tell you of my friend
Who suppose to the closest thing to me on earth

Even thou his mom and dad where young
They had a decision to make

It was either to follow their dream job
Or to bring you into this crazy would out here

Even thou I was not born but in my mommy tummy
You where still consider and oops or a maybe

Your parents knew what was right in the eyes of God
But went there ways of their dream job

They had you aborted
And now I am here and don’t have my closest friend

To share my secret with
To give me a hug when I’m down

Because you parents made the wrong decision
Now people who think of doing this

Please don’t you maybe killing
Someone else closest friend


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Abortion

Let me tell you of my friend
Who suppose to the closest thing to me on earth

Even thou his mom and dad where young
They had a decision to make

It was either to follow their dream job
Or to bring you into this crazy would out here

Even thou I was not born but in my mommy tummy
You where still consider and oops or a maybe

Your parents knew what was right in the eyes of God
But went there ways of their dream job

They had you aborted
And now I am here and don’t have my closest friend

To share my secret with
To give me a hug when I’m down

Because you parents made the wrong decision
Now people who think of doing this

Please don’t you maybe killing
Someone else closest friend

i really like it i feel like people shouldnt have abortions to me they basically seem as thou they are killn anotha dont we have enough of that in our world already? if anything i can understand adoption but i still dont like that. DONT DO "IT" IF YOU CANT HANDLE THE CONSEQUENCES!!!!
but anyways i like it at least an A+ for u

I am pro-choice, so I don't like it. Maybe you should stop telling other people what to do. It's their body, how about you let them take care of themselves. People don't need you to tell them what's right and what's wrong. Everyone has a conscience, they are perfectly capable of deciding whether or not to follow through with the pregnancy.

I think it's pretty good.
Some places could use some work.
I like how you did it from the point of view of a friend.
Nice work:)

Very nice poem....I also think that abortion is very wrong......I think that if you can't hold a baby and kill it, then they shouldn't get abortions