A poem called "careless" How is this.?

Question:"careless"

Bring to me the endless night,
celebrate with my own suffering.
Here to both my black/gold eyes,
so perfect for a prince.
The worst has yet to come i fear,
we've brought this on ourseves.
All engulfed in pure hate,
hopeless yes, our lives shall be.
The fear weighs oh so heavy,
regrets we've known for years.
Complete my nightmares heavenly,
as I'm beaten one last time.
One thing is for certain,
the living wish for death.
We are worse than nothing.
careless as we should be.
The end of all reveals itself,
Life shall cease to be.
.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "careless"

Bring to me the endless night,
celebrate with my own suffering.
Here to both my black/gold eyes,
so perfect for a prince.
The worst has yet to come i fear,
we've brought this on ourseves.
All engulfed in pure hate,
hopeless yes, our lives shall be.
The fear weighs oh so heavy,
regrets we've known for years.
Complete my nightmares heavenly,
as I'm beaten one last time.
One thing is for certain,
the living wish for death.
We are worse than nothing.
careless as we should be.
The end of all reveals itself,
Life shall cease to be.
.

This, for me, is the Dark Prince breakthrough piece. You have used your usual cheery disposition again, but this time, you served it with grace and elegance. #2 for the 2009 book, if you want...TD

Needs stanzas

Personally, I think it is an excellent poem because it is so descriptive.

I also think that it would make a great song and that you have a future in writing. Keep it up. :)

Really good, I love it!

I can tell this has some hidden meaning and what ever it is I am sorry you had to go through it. 1 misspelled word though, ourseves should be ourselves, I think.

Great job as usual.

Dude you are great at poems writing.my girl would like some of this.maybe i will start writing poetry too.

so nilhistic
************ the end of the world is nigh***************
Armageddon the hell outa here!