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Question:"the prince"

Tears run down my wizened face,
wishing for just once.
I the mighty Darkened Prince,
weeping like a fool.
Once it seems so long ago,
I stood so straight and tall,
A prince is just in waiting,
to the throne of the true King.
I may never reach that high,
At this thought I merely sigh.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "the prince"

Tears run down my wizened face,
wishing for just once.
I the mighty Darkened Prince,
weeping like a fool.
Once it seems so long ago,
I stood so straight and tall,
A prince is just in waiting,
to the throne of the true King.
I may never reach that high,
At this thought I merely sigh.

Maybe it's time for the Prince to be crowned King: perhaps Sovereignty is what you seek...

Nice poetic pause at the end, giving the reader time to ponder and what not!

It's pretty good.
Nice work:)

Short and to the point. As always, I don't have much to say. I am always speechless when reading your writings.

awesome master! i like it!