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Position:Home>Poetry> I wrote this originally just for Marguerite. this is revised as the original isQuestion:"the prince" Tears run down my wizened face, wishing for just once. I the mighty Darkened Prince, weeping like a fool. Once it seems so long ago, I stood so straight and tall, A prince is just in waiting, to the throne of the true King. I may never reach that high, At this thought I merely sigh. Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "the prince" Tears run down my wizened face, wishing for just once. I the mighty Darkened Prince, weeping like a fool. Once it seems so long ago, I stood so straight and tall, A prince is just in waiting, to the throne of the true King. I may never reach that high, At this thought I merely sigh. Maybe it's time for the Prince to be crowned King: perhaps Sovereignty is what you seek... Nice poetic pause at the end, giving the reader time to ponder and what not! It's pretty good. Nice work:) Short and to the point. As always, I don't have much to say. I am always speechless when reading your writings. awesome master! i like it! |