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Question:i was messin around with an away message and then all these words flew at me. They dont rhyme and it probably doesnt make much sense so if you can help make it sound better and add a last line that would be great, thanks!

life is short, you gotta enjoy it while it lasts
do the things that make you happy
do the things that make you sad
enjoy the things that make you laugh
enjoy the things that make you cry
because living life without emotion...


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: i was messin around with an away message and then all these words flew at me. They dont rhyme and it probably doesnt make much sense so if you can help make it sound better and add a last line that would be great, thanks!

life is short, you gotta enjoy it while it lasts
do the things that make you happy
do the things that make you sad
enjoy the things that make you laugh
enjoy the things that make you cry
because living life without emotion...

Because living life without emotion
Is not a life at all.

makes you want to die

means you are already dead.

something along the lines of 'will leave you feeling empty inside'
x

you wont care less about promotion

is not living life at all.

That is the only last line I could think of. Hope this helps!

BECAUSE LIVING LIFE WITHOUT EMOTION IS NOT LIVING

life is short, so make it last, live for today and dont dwell on the past. make life happy and dont be sad. even though the things in the past that might make you cry, so make every day happy, because tomarrow you may die. if things didnt seem to work out in the past, just remember there might be another day, so keep a happy thought and even though you might feel sad, just remember theres people who love you even though you are bad......... this might not be what your after, but this is all i can come up with.

Is like being lost in an endless ocean.