This is for a very special woman. She know who she is. how is this.?

Question:"fire"

At the gates of heaven,
a place we both reside.
We both love each others,
deeper, darker sides.

I want to be your plaything,
a toy for your desire.
My complete surrender,
to you my only love.

Only hours can fullfil,
All my dark urges.
You my darkest angel,
queen of the midnight hour.

I will be your challenge,
and your nights surptise.
Please come now and play with me,
I need to feel your fire.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "fire"

At the gates of heaven,
a place we both reside.
We both love each others,
deeper, darker sides.

I want to be your plaything,
a toy for your desire.
My complete surrender,
to you my only love.

Only hours can fullfil,
All my dark urges.
You my darkest angel,
queen of the midnight hour.

I will be your challenge,
and your nights surptise.
Please come now and play with me,
I need to feel your fire.

Dear friend poet.

I can understand why you are residing "OUTSIDE of the gates of heaven" and your poem tells the reason, you are far to carnally minded to be allowed to enter. Your setting needs to be elsewhere.
It is not a poem that I particularly enjoyed reading, but let us discuss it anyway. It is of unrestricted passion, with little thought to what it may conjure up in the mind of the reader.
It is best suited as a piece of prose with a reading rating of "Over 18 years of age" for you have certainly pulled no punches.

Robert

She must be someone really special.

wow whoever this poem is for, he or she must be very lucky to have someone like you

This was completely awesome. I would love to be on the receiving end of this, great job.

Oh ya, I think you were trying to say surprise not surptise. LOL!

Listen to you Loverboy.

There are two songs that you need to listen to tonight if you can: "The Bleeding" by 5 finger death punch and "Devil's Plaything" by Danzig. They both could have been written by either of us, though I think the later is more seductive and dark- just like you....

oh, thanks, by the way

Unlike madmoiselle rose who confuse your sexual preference, I like the poem very much, she must be a lucky woman. Whoever she is, must read it.

Dude this is a really awesome poem and sounds like you have a girl lined up already,rock on.

ahhhhhhh......i think i know who it is...i think...is it her? right? yes? i liked it! huzzah for master!!!! xD
~Grasshopper