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Position:Home>Poetry> A title is needed for this poem, what do you believe will be a good title?Question:Hi. This is a poem that i just came up with. I woke up this morning missing my love who is far away because of his job. He is a marine and i havent seen him since Jan. Not very long ago but i love and miss him. Anywho you may comment or give me some tips on fixing it. Thanks i was thinking a title like Waiting For June or Once Upon a Moon or something lol This is how I feel. I am quite the dreamer and I fantasize on wishes that cannot be I have an untold mystery that others cannot see But as strange as it is, it is you that knows what’s inside of me I am of small stature I don’t see the height of my fears Yet I know I have possibilities that come with no dismay For some reason I have you, to help me overcome a fear each day. You are my selection, my comfort the reason for a smile.There are no reasons to pretend that love is great denial For my heart that is still very broken knows it wants you. I walk away when the tough gets going I have a fear that keeps me from growin Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Hi. This is a poem that i just came up with. I woke up this morning missing my love who is far away because of his job. He is a marine and i havent seen him since Jan. Not very long ago but i love and miss him. Anywho you may comment or give me some tips on fixing it. Thanks i was thinking a title like Waiting For June or Once Upon a Moon or something lol This is how I feel. I am quite the dreamer and I fantasize on wishes that cannot be I have an untold mystery that others cannot see But as strange as it is, it is you that knows what’s inside of me I am of small stature I don’t see the height of my fears Yet I know I have possibilities that come with no dismay For some reason I have you, to help me overcome a fear each day. You are my selection, my comfort the reason for a smile.There are no reasons to pretend that love is great denial For my heart that is still very broken knows it wants you. I walk away when the tough gets going I have a fear that keeps me from growin Try...If and When...I think it fits perfectly...given the angst and anxiety anyone faces when given the insurmountable task of knowing (something) when it's impossible to know... no reasons to pretend broken Blue Moon oh i'm argentine and i didn't know the expression Once upon a moon i like your poem very much the title could be "for some reason" The Great Love try "dreamer" |