Poem feedback please?

Question:the earth trembles
and i fall through
truth burns me
like the fire to come

never turning back
can't say i didn't look
try to stay strong
but i crumble

i don't know my destiny
but i know what i must do
i've got to hold my own
i've got to push through

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: the earth trembles
and i fall through
truth burns me
like the fire to come

never turning back
can't say i didn't look
try to stay strong
but i crumble

i don't know my destiny
but i know what i must do
i've got to hold my own
i've got to push through

It's definitely better than the others that I've read on here today!

I like yours. It's very good.