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Position:Home>Poetry> Alobar 3 syllables?Question:Alobar springtime Sin is on his mind is true his lady friend calls Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Alobar springtime Sin is on his mind is true his lady friend calls Neat Haiku....you're on! Don't particularily know what it's about, but that's okay. Due to the enormous amounts of pollen, I'm not particularily awake! Did you mean 'ash'....look see..... Alobar....if he DID change it to 6-6-6, it would still qualify as a Haiku.....the count is not only that worn-out 5-7-5 Ah, you have pleased me so my friend. Glad to be a source of inspiration. If we were to change it to 6,6,6, would that cast me in the role of Satan? forgot to answer: yes, three syllables. |