What do you think about this personification poem?

Question:The cold wind is singing
While the snowflakes dance.
The trees is freezing
As oceans and rivers grow into ice.

Any mistake? If so, can you please help me fix it? Thanks!

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: The cold wind is singing
While the snowflakes dance.
The trees is freezing
As oceans and rivers grow into ice.

Any mistake? If so, can you please help me fix it? Thanks!

Great poem! Nicely done but instead of IS freezing put ARE freezing. Great job love the poem.

I think ur talented. You should be a poet when you grow up!

LOL

Great job
Terriffic job.
Excellent job.
Fantastic job!

well one glaring mistake is that oceans cannot freeze over and neither can most rivers.

also " trees ARE freezing" not "is"

trees dont really freeze either,, its really not that great a poem....sorry

Just one mistake; instead of the trees is freezing either:

* The trees are freezing or
* The tree is freezing

Sounds like a good poem though, your personification is great!