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Question:tell me who you are
tell me who the hell you think you are
tell me why you act that way

not the same person
i was friends with long ago
why did you change?

you aren't some kinda miracle
not gods gift the the earth
so get you feet on the ground
take a look around

look what you did
you ruined everything
you caused it all
hows that for gods gift

not everybody is in love with you
not everyone is blind
and you just need to realize
we're all the same inside


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: tell me who you are
tell me who the hell you think you are
tell me why you act that way

not the same person
i was friends with long ago
why did you change?

you aren't some kinda miracle
not gods gift the the earth
so get you feet on the ground
take a look around

look what you did
you ruined everything
you caused it all
hows that for gods gift

not everybody is in love with you
not everyone is blind
and you just need to realize
we're all the same inside

kinda angry but powerful