I think this is one of the nicest poems I have ever written (not best, just nice

Question:The Poem

If all the wishes
in all the world
could all come true

Then all the girls
in all the worlds
would all look like you

All the birds
in all the lands
would all sing your name

And all the songs
that were then sung
would celebrate the same

So come, give-in
come be with me
let us share a life

Let I to you
and you to me
become, then, my wife

That is the wish
in all the world
that I’d wish come true

That all the girls
in all the worlds
suddenly look like you

And all the birds
across the lands
are singing your name

And all the songs
that they sing
celebrate the same

And all the songs
that they sing
celebrate the same.

(November 19, 2004)

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: The Poem

If all the wishes
in all the world
could all come true

Then all the girls
in all the worlds
would all look like you

All the birds
in all the lands
would all sing your name

And all the songs
that were then sung
would celebrate the same

So come, give-in
come be with me
let us share a life

Let I to you
and you to me
become, then, my wife

That is the wish
in all the world
that I’d wish come true

That all the girls
in all the worlds
suddenly look like you

And all the birds
across the lands
are singing your name

And all the songs
that they sing
celebrate the same

And all the songs
that they sing
celebrate the same.

(November 19, 2004)

Heart felt poem, just please don't make me read it again

this is a good poem

I like I hope the girl you are talking about likes it too.

At least it is poetry. and it is nice. I like it

Very nice. I like it a lot.

This is beautiful! You are quite gifted; it's difficult to make repetition work, but in this case, it only makes the poem stronger. Your wording is gorgeous. All in all, I'd have to say that this poem could definitely make a girl swoon.

It is very nice and very sweet. Good flow and rhyme scheme.