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Position:Home>Poetry> Gutter - a poem.?Question:gutter like everything down the drain? or up in smoke. its going somewhere different. besides everywhere its been before don't feel bad don't feel unsure dont go to the gutter girl youve been there before. All I'm saying is whats wrong with a little wish maybe a little good luck I know you like to see me when im broken down and hurting but i guess its true I really can be stronger than you Don't go to the gutter girl If you look, you'll see you've been there before and see the tracks, the tracks you made after you ran from that shallow grave they lived beside the tracks and longed to live beside the sea all their smiles and laughter smothered in a dream exhausted in their sleep but they know what they seek and thats enough just enough to dim the thoughts of feeling like they aren't enough... Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: gutter like everything down the drain? or up in smoke. its going somewhere different. besides everywhere its been before don't feel bad don't feel unsure dont go to the gutter girl youve been there before. All I'm saying is whats wrong with a little wish maybe a little good luck I know you like to see me when im broken down and hurting but i guess its true I really can be stronger than you Don't go to the gutter girl If you look, you'll see you've been there before and see the tracks, the tracks you made after you ran from that shallow grave they lived beside the tracks and longed to live beside the sea all their smiles and laughter smothered in a dream exhausted in their sleep but they know what they seek and thats enough just enough to dim the thoughts of feeling like they aren't enough... interesting thats dumb hates it!! This poem is really great Very interesting. I like it. But you need to look at punctuation. That's all I see. |