"Oh Foolish Heart" ?

Question:Oh..to look deep inside ones soul
past the hardening shell that protects
Rummaging around for that peice of hope
that just might save what little is left...of the heart.

Searching ones self as if on trial
only to be found all alone once more
Looking for hope where no man dare,
or even dream to go...oh foolish heart
Art tho blind?

Broken hearts lie on broken promises
Broken dreams lie close behind
The empty soul can feel but pain
twas better left alone, for tis your destiny...
Oh foolish heart.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Oh..to look deep inside ones soul
past the hardening shell that protects
Rummaging around for that peice of hope
that just might save what little is left...of the heart.

Searching ones self as if on trial
only to be found all alone once more
Looking for hope where no man dare,
or even dream to go...oh foolish heart
Art tho blind?

Broken hearts lie on broken promises
Broken dreams lie close behind
The empty soul can feel but pain
twas better left alone, for tis your destiny...
Oh foolish heart.

Reading your words makes me look within and feel the pain. The pain that I try so hard to bury. Well written. mmmuuaahh

This poem was great! This left me with the feeling of hopelessness. You write very well, and I enjoy reading them!

Peace

i love it.......your poems r really good

Heartfelt, within and without, Such a deep thinker thou art.