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heather mills you gold digging whore
what makes you think you deserved
some more
you had no honor or integrity,
just a sense of greed.
you went out in public and started to beg
then went into battle high and mighty on
just one leg
you claimed you reinvegorated pauls career,
and that it's a shame that your daughter
would have to hear
the truth about you and your money grubbing
soul
what was paul thinking marrying a money grubbing ho?
next time i hope pual sees what's up
and protects his fortune with a pre-nup
so why don't you try to see things his way
do we have to go on until we can't talk no more
you'll just have to realize you are gold digger, who is just
getting older
with so much bad karma,
carrying all that weight on your shoulder.

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heather mills you gold digging whore
what makes you think you deserved
some more
you had no honor or integrity,
just a sense of greed.
you went out in public and started to beg
then went into battle high and mighty on
just one leg
you claimed you reinvegorated pauls career,
and that it's a shame that your daughter
would have to hear
the truth about you and your money grubbing
soul
what was paul thinking marrying a money grubbing ho?
next time i hope pual sees what's up
and protects his fortune with a pre-nup
so why don't you try to see things his way
do we have to go on until we can't talk no more
you'll just have to realize you are gold digger, who is just
getting older
with so much bad karma,
carrying all that weight on your shoulder.
the content is fab, though it was hilarious! I do however think that the rhyme doesnt really flow, i struggled to put a rhythm to it when i read but still, its a good attempt! a little tweaking here and there and it will be perfect! perhaps send it to Sir Paul to get his view?!!? haha
You two guys that attempted an answer should be ashamed...you are jealous of my talents and it shows. Report It

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    • I will say this - quantity is not a measure of poetry.

    I've written thousands of poems. A lot of them sucked so bad they affected the orbit of the sun.

    This piece is unfocused and bland. It's a rant cast as a poem. I'm sure your serious attempts at poetry are better.
    ummmm, ok. With an edit and a reduction of about one third of the words this diatribe against Heather Mills, while passionate, would be good for a chuckle. Your vocabulary and imagery are fine, I just think there are better things to do than write about some money grubbing one leggered vegan.
    So Paul puts it to music
    And plays it on his Hoffner Bass
    Makes another boat-load of dollars
    After which now, all the women race!

    But then Frank sues him
    For stealing his words
    And someone then writes of Frank
    Comparing him to turds.

    But Frank laughs him off
    For he is now rich too
    After publishing a tome
    Of poems about poo!

    Speaking of which, you may be interested in this site:
    http://www.didyoujustpoop.com/
    Not so much poetry as venting. It's ok to have an opinion but there are 2 sides to every story.

    Why is it alright to make it our business.
    Wow great poem and i loved it alot.i wish i could write like that


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