Just wondering if this sounds good or not. critisism is welcome?

Question:If i was to kill,
how would you feel,?
would you stay real.?
Or would you tell, and tell me I was going to hell,?
if i had a reason,
could you believe it was good enough to make a man stop breathin,?
Would you look at me the same,?
Or just think im insane,?

Who am I kiddin
look at the crime i committed
Cause of me that man's no longer livin
Is it possible for me to be forgiven,?
Will God take me,?
He's gotta understand no one is mistake free

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: If i was to kill,
how would you feel,?
would you stay real.?
Or would you tell, and tell me I was going to hell,?
if i had a reason,
could you believe it was good enough to make a man stop breathin,?
Would you look at me the same,?
Or just think im insane,?

Who am I kiddin
look at the crime i committed
Cause of me that man's no longer livin
Is it possible for me to be forgiven,?
Will God take me,?
He's gotta understand no one is mistake free

UMMM hopefully you really didn't kil someone but I sort of sort of not liked it.

I would not could not like that poem
not in a box not with an ox

sounds like you need to read more T.S. Elliot and less Dr. Suess