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Question:i need to add more adjectives to my poem so could u help please???thank yoou!!!!!!!!

Colorado weather

The day is cold, the air is crisp
The sun is behind deep layers of clouds
Having no chance of emerging
The birds are deep in their nest
The wind blows the leaves from the trees.
The rain starts to fall and then it turns into snow
Chimneys pouring out smoke
Hot soup cooking on stoves
Kids making giant snowmen
Pulling out the bin of snow gear
Not seen since last winter
Most of it’s too small
The snow starts to die down
As does the excitement of children
The sun peeks out from the clouds
Gutters flow with icy water
Sunny day in the forecast
Time to breakout the flip flops
Hang up the winter jackets
Then the rain starts to fall
And then it turns into snow
Starting over the vicious cycle
Of Colorado weather

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: i need to add more adjectives to my poem so could u help please???thank yoou!!!!!!!!

Colorado weather

The day is cold, the air is crisp
The sun is behind deep layers of clouds
Having no chance of emerging
The birds are deep in their nest
The wind blows the leaves from the trees.
The rain starts to fall and then it turns into snow
Chimneys pouring out smoke
Hot soup cooking on stoves
Kids making giant snowmen
Pulling out the bin of snow gear
Not seen since last winter
Most of it’s too small
The snow starts to die down
As does the excitement of children
The sun peeks out from the clouds
Gutters flow with icy water
Sunny day in the forecast
Time to breakout the flip flops
Hang up the winter jackets
Then the rain starts to fall
And then it turns into snow
Starting over the vicious cycle
Of Colorado weather

The new day is cold, the air is sharply crisp
The warm sun is hidden behind deep gray layers of clouds
Having no chance of emerging
The sleeping birds are deep in their cosey nest
The wild wind blows the broken leaves from the shivering trees.
The dreary rain starts to fall and then it turns into white fresh snow
Chimneys pouring out thick grey smoke
Hot soup cooking and bubbling on stoves
Kids happily making giant snowmen
Pulling out the stuffed bin of forgotten snow gear
Not seen since last winter
Most of it’s too small
The chilling snow starts to die down
As does the excitement of children
The shining sun peeks out from the grey clouds
Gutters flow with icy water
Sunny day in the forecast
Time to breakout the flip flops
Hang up the warm winter jackets
Then the pounding rain starts to fall
And then it turns into cold white snow
Starting over the vicious cycle
Of Colorado weather

I think it's beautifully written and the only thing I see that could possibly be improved is your punctuation and spacing. Other than that it's described flowingly.

It sounds like a story to me, sorry but I like it. You need some punctuation in there to make the breaks better. You did a good job of describing the weather and all.