Heyy help me out for 10 pts?

Question:which one do you like better?

He always wondered why.
He forced himself to never cry.
but sometimes he wanted to die.
she never cared.

His mother left him.
The light in his heart going dim.
He wanted so badly her love.
she never cared.

The bruises on his heart.
always make him fall apart.
The boy is badly broken.
She never cared.

He is gone now.
You could ask how.
But you already know
She never cared.

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People always say
hold on and you'll be ok.
We all know that ain't true.
The world isn't new.
It's always hard.
why we put up a guard.

People downtown dealin
people cheatin, people stealin.
the world ain't right.
got to reach new heights.
then we'll finally show
maybe people ain't so low.

maybe we all good at heart.
we all do our part.
we got to learn to love.
so we can be w/ the father above.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: which one do you like better?

He always wondered why.
He forced himself to never cry.
but sometimes he wanted to die.
she never cared.

His mother left him.
The light in his heart going dim.
He wanted so badly her love.
she never cared.

The bruises on his heart.
always make him fall apart.
The boy is badly broken.
She never cared.

He is gone now.
You could ask how.
But you already know
She never cared.

--------------------------------------...
People always say
hold on and you'll be ok.
We all know that ain't true.
The world isn't new.
It's always hard.
why we put up a guard.

People downtown dealin
people cheatin, people stealin.
the world ain't right.
got to reach new heights.
then we'll finally show
maybe people ain't so low.

maybe we all good at heart.
we all do our part.
we got to learn to love.
so we can be w/ the father above.
--------------------------------------...

I absolutely love the third poem!! I think that you are a really good poet for a thirteen year old! I also think that plenty of kids can identify with that one.

I really like the third poem!!! It's how it is with me!!!

the 2nd one has more ring to it :]

i love the second poem.......it describes the world as it is and i think that it gives a message to those who feel like giving up on life......don't get me wrong, i also like the other two poems but for me, the second poem is my favourite.....

there all really good. you could easier make all of these loner .
overall i like the first one best it reminds you of all the children who are getting hurt right this minuet. these lines are my favorite tho
' People always say
hold on and you'll be ok.
We all know that ain't true.
The world isn't new.
It's always hard'.
your a very strong writer. so don't give up
keep writing. Good luck.

i like the second one cuz i understand it