To my baby nephew, good poem or bad?

Question:To my baby nephew
I want to tell you a story
one of your mom and dad

Your mom and dad
are not here
for one reason and plain

The war in the east
Has taken them away
and keeping them from you

I wish you could see them
and them to see you
for its not fair what they've missed

They were fighting for their lives
while you fought to stand up

they where sleeping on the sand
while you where in you crib

I want you to know that they love you so much
but their jobs can't be denied.

Your mom and dad are fighting
for the freedom we all have and enjoy.

Should I keep this for when my nephew gets old enough to understand it? I hope my sister and buother in law come back home safe.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: To my baby nephew
I want to tell you a story
one of your mom and dad

Your mom and dad
are not here
for one reason and plain

The war in the east
Has taken them away
and keeping them from you

I wish you could see them
and them to see you
for its not fair what they've missed

They were fighting for their lives
while you fought to stand up

they where sleeping on the sand
while you where in you crib

I want you to know that they love you so much
but their jobs can't be denied.

Your mom and dad are fighting
for the freedom we all have and enjoy.

Should I keep this for when my nephew gets old enough to understand it? I hope my sister and buother in law come back home safe.

It almost made me cry..dang hormones.....lucky your nephew has both parents alive....I don't see my nephew much cause of the dang father....I don't like him....it's his fault that cause the death of someone I truely cared about...mysister. Take good take of your nephew and tell him stories of how wonderful his parents are and how much they really love him. Be lucky that at least you have your nephew by your side....I only see mine every 2 weeks =[

i think it's a beautiful poem. it will mean a lot to him when he can understand it.

that is a wonderful poem!
i would wait to give it to him until maybe he is about 12 so it doesnt mske him think of the wrong thing
whats important though is that the poem came from your heart and im sure hell love it!
GOOD LUCK!!
ME

you want a poem... for a baby

You are a baby.
but your daddy maybe
with sexually abuse you
that wold make his butt smell P.U
cause i farted while he was finishing up
when my mom was at the docters she pee'd in a cup!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow what a lovely poem full of hope and love for the baby' and the wonderful parents risking their lives so we may be free....