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Question:Why do I fall
for the funny guy
who can make me laugh
until i cry

Why do i fall
for the smart one
who can rival me
until the day is done?

Why do i fall
for the cute boy
who can be
so very coy?

Why do I fall
for the talented friend
who keeps me intreaged
until the shows end?

Should I send this to the person I wrote this for? or would it be awkward?


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Why do I fall
for the funny guy
who can make me laugh
until i cry

Why do i fall
for the smart one
who can rival me
until the day is done?

Why do i fall
for the cute boy
who can be
so very coy?

Why do I fall
for the talented friend
who keeps me intreaged
until the shows end?

Should I send this to the person I wrote this for? or would it be awkward?

yeah i think if you were with the person and had been for a while
then go ahead.
but if it's just randomly....
then i think it might be a smige awkward.
don't get me wrong, i love the poem
but maybe don't give it to him yet

awkward.

Send it. You did well

It would be kind of awkward, no offense. Its a good poem, just not the kind of poem you would send to a loved one.