Will you tell me what u think about my poem?

Question:“Coming Home”
Brittany

I am praying that this time will be different than any other.
Finally I no longer see you as a stranger, but as my brother.
My head is spinning in circles; reality is too much to bear.
Being very careful on what emotions I am willing to share.

God only knows if this will happen again and my heart will break.
My whole life is in your hands now, everything is at stake.
I still cannot believe that you are really coming home now.
It seems that you have changed, although I don’t know how.

I have waited so long for this moment, and now I don’t know what to do.
So many times before I have said I was done with you.
I never meant all of those nasty things I have said.
Let’s forget about all of the horrible past, and be a family instead.

Sound like a deal?

Writers Note—Hello everyone! This poem was about my brother that has made some progress on our relationship as a family after one year. Truth be told, it was all bull crap, but nevertheless,

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: “Coming Home”
Brittany

I am praying that this time will be different than any other.
Finally I no longer see you as a stranger, but as my brother.
My head is spinning in circles; reality is too much to bear.
Being very careful on what emotions I am willing to share.

God only knows if this will happen again and my heart will break.
My whole life is in your hands now, everything is at stake.
I still cannot believe that you are really coming home now.
It seems that you have changed, although I don’t know how.

I have waited so long for this moment, and now I don’t know what to do.
So many times before I have said I was done with you.
I never meant all of those nasty things I have said.
Let’s forget about all of the horrible past, and be a family instead.

Sound like a deal?

Writers Note—Hello everyone! This poem was about my brother that has made some progress on our relationship as a family after one year. Truth be told, it was all bull crap, but nevertheless,

Very NiiCe and sentimental! I liked it ALOT ... its deffinetly seems like a poem that alot of people can compare to or put their selves in! I really LiiKED it!!! AWESOME POEM!!

Well, you seem to have a lot of depth and incite about your family coming together instead of falling apart. It sounds like it would be more appreciated if you shared it with your family instead of online, even though it't tougher to do, it helps. Its never too late for change. I really love your poem and I'm sure your familia will too. =]

great poem... it's touching

wonderful its lively fun and emotional personal too you should go for it

Awesome Poem
There is always hope for change
and if you give him this and he puts it in his wallet..
Maybe someday when he's having a hard time, he will read it and it will give him strength.

It's not easy, I know..but hope, hope is sometimes all we have to hang on to in this world.
I don't know how old you are but we can be the worst of kids and out grow it when we become adults..change is possible.

good effort..

Very touching.
I'd give it a 8/10.
:]
Keep on writing!