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Position:Home>Poetry> What does this make you think?Question:Is color like me does it live, does it breathe is it happy or sad does it catch disease Does color hate Mondays and have good days too does it love the holidays just like me & you What makes us think that colors don't cry having so many feelings just like you & I For if it can give it does it not have from the womb comes the baby from the mother and dad If you can feel what it does to you what makes you think color don't feel too? ~Pisceana~ Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Is color like me does it live, does it breathe is it happy or sad does it catch disease Does color hate Mondays and have good days too does it love the holidays just like me & you What makes us think that colors don't cry having so many feelings just like you & I For if it can give it does it not have from the womb comes the baby from the mother and dad If you can feel what it does to you what makes you think color don't feel too? ~Pisceana~ it makes me think color is beautiful..;( 'tear' my color is hot pink i think of a pink pussy Dang that's deep. I'm not sure what it makes me think... maybe something about the depth of colors. I really like lol my colorsss green and blueee lol i like it :-p. my color is red..and that's for love and passion and mischief...yeah...sweet it makes me think that i have written something familiar to that a while ago :) i feel good! hahaha is this your poem? nice! well, upon reading it, it sounds like you are talking about the color red. it makes me think you need to take the just out of line 12; add the word "that" before "color" and change " don't " to " doesn't " in the last line kthx. for some odd reason it made me think of a pretty flower but i think thats because ur icon that i saw in the corner of my eye as i read it :) Its sort of funny, and it shows you are very talented because this idea is perfect! Asking if colors are like humans, very good! A well thought out poem. I like the bounce it has, Though one has to be careful not to loose it in verse four. But none the less, I did like it and it was just long enough to hold my interest. Robert Purple and hunter's green are my favorite colors. I love the earthy colors although I can't wear most of them. I look better in muted colors like dusty rose and cream which I do like some what. I like your poem. |