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Question:Is color like me
does it live, does it breathe
is it happy or sad
does it catch disease

Does color hate Mondays
and have good days too
does it love the holidays
just like me & you

What makes us think
that colors don't cry
having so many feelings
just like you & I

For if it can give it
does it not have
from the womb comes the baby
from the mother and dad

If you can feel
what it does to you
what makes you think
color don't feel too?

~Pisceana~


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Is color like me
does it live, does it breathe
is it happy or sad
does it catch disease

Does color hate Mondays
and have good days too
does it love the holidays
just like me & you

What makes us think
that colors don't cry
having so many feelings
just like you & I

For if it can give it
does it not have
from the womb comes the baby
from the mother and dad

If you can feel
what it does to you
what makes you think
color don't feel too?

~Pisceana~

it makes me think color is beautiful..;( 'tear'

my color is hot pink

i think of a pink pussy

Dang that's deep. I'm not sure what it makes me think... maybe something about the depth of colors.

I really like lol my colorsss green and blueee lol

i like it :-p. my color is red..and that's for love and passion and mischief...yeah...sweet

it makes me think that i have written something familiar to that a while ago :) i feel good! hahaha

is this your poem? nice! well, upon reading it, it sounds like you are talking about the color red.

it makes me think you need to take the just out of line 12; add the word "that" before "color" and change " don't " to " doesn't " in the last line


kthx.

for some odd reason it made me think of a pretty flower but i think thats because ur icon that i saw in the corner of my eye as i read it :)

Its sort of funny, and it shows you are very talented because this idea is perfect! Asking if colors are like humans, very good!

A well thought out poem. I like the bounce it has, Though one has to be careful not to loose it in verse four. But none the less, I did like it and it was just long enough to hold my interest.

Robert

Purple and hunter's green are my favorite colors. I love the earthy colors although I can't wear most of them. I look better in muted colors like dusty rose and cream which I do like some what. I like your poem.