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Position:Home>Poetry> Does this seem like a good poem?Question:The best place it seems, to go here is my dream, my heart is in Paris Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: The best place it seems, to go here is my dream, my heart is in Paris It needs slight rewording.....but good!! Its short and not quite clear. I would extend it out. You have the base of a great poem. Also keep the message. many people make them longer and lose the message. Kepp writing! no it seems like it could be a good one. i mean u really dont leave much to work wit. but wit a little revision it could work. i like short poems but three lines, its too short |