What do you think of my poem? It called True Love?

Question:True love is like a shooting star moving through the sky,
True love is like a heart shape strawberry pie.
True love is like sitting outside looking at the moon,
True love is like staying home watching your favorite cartoon.
True love is like a red rose that surely never dies,
True love is never saying farewell or good byes.
True love come once a lifetime that is what they say,
True love is when two people care for each other everyday.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: True love is like a shooting star moving through the sky,
True love is like a heart shape strawberry pie.
True love is like sitting outside looking at the moon,
True love is like staying home watching your favorite cartoon.
True love is like a red rose that surely never dies,
True love is never saying farewell or good byes.
True love come once a lifetime that is what they say,
True love is when two people care for each other everyday.

I love this poem! it's amazing with all the word choice and the rhyme scheme!:)
great job! awesome work:)
keep up the awesome work:)
ohh but one tiny little thing from my point of view... in rthe second last line you say true love COME? did u mean to say comes?

You have a talent to express your feelings. What you need is sharpening your angles. Increase your vocabulary and keep your simplicity intact.

wow that is really good....i asked the same question on here and i got 2 answers and they were both saying it was a bad poem so i think i gonna quit tryin to write them bc obvioulsy mine r bad but good luck w/ yours!

great poem. you have talent.my wife and i loved it.

Great poem. I like your word choice.