One Moment, what do you think?

Question:we live for,
that moment.
the one second that
changes us.
that defines us.
that we will remember
for the rest of our existence.
the second that flips our
world upside down,
or resets our minds.

that one moment.
that one moment,
when time escapes us.
when the earth rotates backwards.
when the stars seem a arm away.

one moment.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: we live for,
that moment.
the one second that
changes us.
that defines us.
that we will remember
for the rest of our existence.
the second that flips our
world upside down,
or resets our minds.

that one moment.
that one moment,
when time escapes us.
when the earth rotates backwards.
when the stars seem a arm away.

one moment.

i like it. it tells a lot about you
one thing though;;
it should be

"when the stars seem an arm away"
"an" instead of "a" I believe

but other than that its cute

sounds good to me

Hey love sounds good to me its really touching :)

yeah its great, but i agree, 'an'

I really like it. I wish I could study poems which match my feelings like it!

I like it. It tells of those moments that slip away so fast we can't notice them before they are gone.

You could sum this up in one word: epiphany. The concept is good, I just did not feel inspired from reading it. It seemed too mundane. Time escapes us and the world upside down are cliches. Challenge yourself to come up with more original ways of wording your feelings. I liked the phrase when the earth rotates backwards.