All who like my last Poem, tell me what you think of this one i am sure you will

Question:Use it all you like but please give me credit lol (Kenneth Duncan)

With pleasure comes pain with pain comes joy

Joy to you all stress be gone

When entering the womb you best be long

What exciting tomb here comes the flood

With life ahead best be prepared

For cribs and cries is all for you

And sleepless nights returns your stress

Think twice next time before you dare

Life without pain is just a lie

The truth in pain brings all the joys

When all is red eat rice with soy

With wisdom gain try once again

Success you scream when all is well

Vanquish all pain and invite happiness

In all ears your name is heard

Kick the bucket with a smile

For life was harsh you did your best

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Use it all you like but please give me credit lol (Kenneth Duncan)

With pleasure comes pain with pain comes joy

Joy to you all stress be gone

When entering the womb you best be long

What exciting tomb here comes the flood

With life ahead best be prepared

For cribs and cries is all for you

And sleepless nights returns your stress

Think twice next time before you dare

Life without pain is just a lie

The truth in pain brings all the joys

When all is red eat rice with soy

With wisdom gain try once again

Success you scream when all is well

Vanquish all pain and invite happiness

In all ears your name is heard

Kick the bucket with a smile

For life was harsh you did your best

I agree a poets mind is like a puzzle. Sometimes simple minded people can't figure it out. But from one poet to another I liked your poem. I could relate to it b/c just the other day i had a scare and believe me i was not prepared but everything turned out okay. So cribs and cries are not for me, at least not yet anyway : ). And next time I will think twice. No worries though I will give you credit for your poem, it was very good.

I don't think I'll need to give you credit, I will never use it for anything, it is nothing but random statements without flow or continuity.

like it.